The tremendous use of pronouns made the book even more confusing than it already was. When there were two women in a scene, it was difficult to tell who was doing what because of all the "she"s. Same with conversation. I had to re-read conversation multiple times to figure out which character was saying what.
The transitions were abrupt. Word choice was poor. Barrier for door? It was borderline erotica-style writing and it's supposed to be a YA book?
I will never get the time back from my life from reading this book and I will most certainly not buy it for my library.